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Talk about being punctual!

Posted by on Oct 31, 2012 in Tips and Tutorials | Comments Off on Talk about being punctual!

Let’s have a look at how punctuation is used in dialogue. This used to confuse me all the time, but there are some simple rules to follow:

1) It’s all one sentence.

Many people separate the sentence in the dialogue from it’s dialogue tag, but that’s wrong. What’s a dialogue tag? That’s the part of the sentence that tells you how the dialogue is expressed. For example “he said.” “she screamed.” “they whispered.”

Look at the following sentences:

“Let’s try again,” he whispered.
 “I’ve got it!” he exclaimed.
“Where do we go?” she asked.

The first thing to note is that the dialogue tags aren’t separate sentences as shown by the lowercase “he” and “she.”

Next, while “Let’s try again,” looks like a complete sentence and should end with a period, it doesn’t. Use a comma because the sentence isn’t over yet. We use a “!” and “?” in the other two example because they’re show how the sentence is read.

Finally, note that the punctuation at the end of the sentence goes inside the quotes.

Now you may be thinking, “I’ve seen dialogue that ends with a period.” You probably have, but was that dialogue  followed by a dialogue tag? If we’ve established the speaker we can often omit the dialogue tag altogether because the context has been established.

“Let’s kill him now,” Eric said, holding the blade of his sword to the king’s throat.
“No!” exclaimed Bart. “We need him alive or we don’t get paid.”
“Fine.” Eric slammed his blade back in its sheath before dropping the king to the floor.

Notice in the last line, the dialogue stands as its own sentence yet we know who’s saying it and how it’s said.

2) What if the dialogue tag comes first?

Bart picked up the king and asked, “Are you going to behave or must I tie you up?”

Notice here that the comma comes after the dialogue tag “asking” and the dialogue begins with a capital even though technically this is still all one sentence.

When the dialogue finishes the sentence it can end with a period like you’d expect.

The king nodded, replying, “I’ll behave. Please don’t hurt me.”

Now we get a little tricky because there are two sentences in the quotes. This is easier to handle when they come at the end, but if they start the sentence then the sentence just before the dialogue tags end in a comma instead of a period if it doesn’t need a “!” or “?” at the end.

3) And if the dialogue tag splits a sentence?

The following two sentences look a lot alike, but the difference is in how they’re punctuated.

“Alright. But,” he said, raising a knife, “if you try anything you’ll not only be bound, but missing a finger.”

See how the whole thing is a sentence? This is because the dialogue is separated by an action occurring as it is said. You have to pay attention when you do this because it doesn’t work usually work with just a plain dialogue tag.

“You have my word,” said the king, “just put away the knife.”
“You have my word,” said the king. “Just put away the knife.”

In these two examples the second one is correct. Saying it out you can hear why the second example works and the first doesn’t.

When you split dialogue this way, always have an action occurring or a reason for a pause in the sentence. When in doubt, read it aloud.

4) Bad dialogue tags

Be careful not to use bad dialogue tags. These are tags that don’t really express speech.

“Hello,” he smiled.

You can’t smile “hello.” You can say “hello.” This is a very common error.

“Hello,” he said with a smile.

Think about what you’re trying to express. Word like “agreed,” “laughed,” and “sobbed,” express actions not speech. You can run your story through the Story Analyzer to find many dialogue tags you may be misusing.

Any questions? Leave a comment.
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Book Trailer: Starling

Posted by on Oct 21, 2012 in Trailers | Comments Off on Book Trailer: Starling

If you liked Leslsey Livingston’s young adult novel trilogy Wondrous Strange, then you’ll love this new book featuring one of its key characters: Fennrys.

LOVE IS JUST THE BEGINNING OF THE END.

Mason Starling is a champion fencer on the Gosforth Academy team, but she’s never had to fight for her life. Not until the night a ferocious, otherworldly storm rips through Manhattan, trapping Mason and her teammates inside the school. Mason is besieged by nightmarish creatures more terrifying than the thunder and lightning as the raging tempest also brings a dangerous stranger into her life: a young man who remembers nothing but his name—the Fennrys Wolf. His arrival tears Mason’s world apart, even as she feels an undeniable connection to him. Together, they seek to unravel the secrets of Fenn’s identity as strange and supernatural forces gather around them. When they discover Mason’s family—with its dark allegiance to ancient Norse gods—is at the heart of the mystery, Fennrys and Mason are suddenly faced with a terrifying future.

Set against the gritty, shadowed back-drop of New York City, this first novel in award-winning author Lesley Livingston’s epic Starling Saga is an intoxicating blend of sweeping romance and pulse-pounding action.

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Make the Universe what you want it to be

Posted by on Oct 4, 2011 in Inspirational | Comments Off on Make the Universe what you want it to be

Although this comes from an actor about acting, I believe it directly applies to us and what we are trying to achieve as Young Adult Writers.

 

If you’re interested in The Alchemist, you can check it out here.

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